|Reviews for Don't Know Me|
| alexis 1/10/07 . chapter 1
hey it's me...how have you been
| Binky 1/6/07 . chapter 1
Kinda confusing. Actually, really confusing. Is this like a nightmare he has again and again? If I interpreted this wrong please explain next time you call. You only have a few errors:
1. She was the greatest human being in the world, and the most unique. She did not make these claims, although he could see that she could not deny them, either. (Don't think there should be a comma before either.)
2. I have come to state a simple announcement that has taken me quite a long time prepare.(There should be a 'to' between time and prepare)
3. The last one I'm not sure about but is 'inelegant' really a word?It sounds weird.
Okay, that's about it. It's well written but like I said before it is quite confusing.
Buh-bye, love you and DON'T FORGET MY BIRTHDAY MANONG!