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| Luv2write4u13 2007-01-18 ch 1,  | abuseOh, this sent chills down my spine. Is he going to kill himself? I just can't see him killing her... |
| kris932 2007-01-07 ch 1, anon. | abusenot bad...better action scence(sort of ) than I thought... |