Hey, S. White! You're story made me cry, and so did the song! I

Hey! It's Psychotic Maniacal Sanity here, from Gaia online. Feel free to check out my rubbish too. xD [Sorry for the shameless advertisements.]

I really enjoyed that. At first I thought it was going to be really morbid, but it actually brought tears to my eyes. As these things do, haha. The emotion was portrayed very well, and I especially loved the song at the end. It was so beautiful.

Thank you for responding so quickly. ^^ It's just one of my favorite songs, and it was played at a friend of mine's funeral. Thank you again!

And you didn't win the contest because...? I really liked this! Liked in a morbid sort of way.
The only dislike was the ending it with a song part. I'm not a big fan of that. But overall, very well done.