 E. A. Tetje 2007-01-30 . chapter 1I really liked this one, how you talked about liking something that wouldn't be what most people would expect. and I like how the poem conveys a sort of longing in it. Good job. |
 Brinneh 2007-01-25 . chapter 1awe...how sad. (i am currently lacking adjectives). i wonder what happened between the speaker and the speaker's lover. great piece. |
 Doxology 2007-01-08 . chapter 1I love this. It's, well, it's glorious. I could see it (and hear it, oddly) in my head. Great job.
Peace and Love
~> Lifted |
 TheatrePhunk 2007-01-07 . chapter 1I love this... and I think it would make a really nice song. |
 C. Earnshaw 2007-01-06 . chapter 1This is officially my new favorite poem. I really like the structure and the parentheses, but above all, the subject matter is perfect. |