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Reviews For: So Not Apart
E. A. Tetje 2007-01-30 . chapter 1
I really liked this one, how you talked about liking something that wouldn't be what most people would expect. and I like how the poem conveys a sort of longing in it. Good job.
Brinneh 2007-01-25 . chapter 1
awe...how sad. (i am currently lacking adjectives). i wonder what happened between the speaker and the speaker's lover. great piece.
Doxology 2007-01-08 . chapter 1
I love this. It's, well, it's glorious. I could see it (and hear it, oddly) in my head. Great job.

Peace and Love

~> Lifted
TheatrePhunk 2007-01-07 . chapter 1
I love this... and I think it would make a really nice song.
C. Earnshaw 2007-01-06 . chapter 1
This is officially my new favorite poem. I really like the structure and the parentheses, but above all, the subject matter is perfect.
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