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| Blueskelton 2007-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseVery interesting thesis, I would like to see it developed further. One thing however regarding your timeline. If Van Helsing lived into the early 1900's then it is possible that the two character's timelines overlapped. Wolverine fought in both World War One as a Canadian Soldier, and World War Second as Weapon X with Captain America. I do not believe that his actual age has ever been established. On an interesting sidenote, Wolverine rescued Erik Lehnsherr (Magneto) from the Concentration Camp of Auschwitz, which is the reason why Magneto will never kill Wolvie despite Magneto having nothing but contempt for "Weapon X". Still except for the Timeline idea it was a very interesting comparison |
| Frore 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like one of those essays that a 5th grader writes when he is first learning how to construct term papers. Do not repeat the same word over and over again. (See how I said "turn paper" instead of "essay"?) And vary your sentence structure. |