Once again, you have demonstrated your flair for original characters and creative plotlines. How much praise can you heap on someone before running out of adjectives?

This was cool. Action, adventure, drama. However, it was a little confusing because of all the names and POV switching. The only problem I'd say this fic has is that the characters have no personalities to connect to the names. Blain and Greg have a little, but it still takes a bit of thinking to connect name to actions. Otherwise, this was really awesome.

Loads of Grins,

~~Elaana

the new edit helped a lot. much easier to follow, the characters are better- good work.

I'm a fan of your Living with Danger series and wanted to reread some old work of yours when I found your FP site... I love it, I truly do. Of the three here, this is my favorite, but the first, the Thomas/Kathryn one... I don't remember the name, but I love the story.

I really hope you add more. I love all your Danger work, and this new stuff is great as well!

If I ever thought that you were only a good writer using someone else's setting and characters, this has proven me wrong. Excellent characteriztion and worldbuilding. Only problems I saw were scenes with the large group, it was hard to tell the different speakers and personalities apart. Otherwise very well done- excellent suspense/tension building, etc. I really enjoyed reading.

/me takes a minute or two to awe at amazing Anne's awesome abilities at writing. Ooh, an alliteration!
I absolutely, positively, 100% loved this! It was so great! I love that 2 and 5 for magic, 2 and 9 for love saying. It was really cool!
/me decides to stop her review so that Anne doesn't have to read anymore, thereby giving a greater chance of an FD update. :)

*Megan*

And another amazing story. The bluffing was really good, and your stories always have little quirks tthat make them incredible to read.
Andrew