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| pixieofdarkness 2007-01-07 ch 1,  | abusethis was very, exciting, i liekd the repeating of phrases and lifting spelled out, nice, |
| felicia13 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseElation much, darling? Because that's really the overpowering emotion in this. What's made you so happy, my love? A bit on the bizarrely happy side. Which is always weird because I think of poetry and it's more sad/neutral. So ... yeah. But it's got a nice sound to it, nonetheless. A bit of a rythym that comes out if you were to read it aloud. Which I didn't. Because my voice hurts. Ouch. Well, have a nice day, darling. *hugs* Love, Felicia. |
| Doc Blood 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI like the way you used the form of the words themselves to add to the meaning. Well done. Peace, Doc |