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morbid-fantasies 2007-01-07 . chapter 1
I know exactly how this feels. Nice work.
Doc Blood 2007-01-07 . chapter 1
This was wonderfully done. I like and write short poetry because it forces me to state my thought as concisely as possible. Personally, I experience abandonment and despair more as a numbness without temperature, but that would not necessarily be accurate about anyone else. Very well written.

Peace, Doc
a silenced revolution 2007-01-07 . chapter 1
Amazing. I love the last two lines. Keep writing.
littlestar-27 2007-01-06 . chapter 1
I really liked this poem, I like how you you use the shadows dance, it creates a great image in the mind. :) great job on this poem.
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