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| Abysmal Tr3pidation 2007-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseVery deep. I love poems that sort ask questions, it really leaves me thinking after I've read it. Oh yeah and Iron Maiden rocks! Keep Writing. ~**~Indiana~**~ |
| theatrical rhapsodies 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. This Is just, beautiful. |
| scotti 2007-03-09 ch 1, | abuseAHh...the crush, the forbidden love, the enigma... call it what you want, but no matter what the name, it still carries the same feeling of desperate longing; your five senses filled to the brim and overrunning with that person’s essence. I know this piece has already been quoted as being 'beautiful', but I feel it needs to be said again. Beautiful. I read it through several times. Each time as I reached the end, I felt compelled to read it again...to feel it again... to dance again. Nice job! |
| LucidNightmares 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI don't know how to comment on this really, the only word that comes to mind is 'beautiful'. |
| littlestar-27 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseW-O-W. I loved this. it is truly amazing " I see you, but you see only what I show you. Look beyond me. See what I feel." I love that part. it is very well written. The whole time I could imagine what was happening. I also love the part " I pretend I can feel our breath on my face, your body supporting mine." this is excelent. keep writing |