Oh, I love this story! I really like the characters and everything. And Ruby sort of reminds me of myself. ^^

I hope you'll continue this story, cuz it's definitely worth it! =D
I'd hate to see it unfinished... T__T

great story, update soon?

no no no no! please don't abandon! I

Oh gosh, I can't wait for the next chapter! Poor Luke though, being sick is no fun. Aww, it's so cute though making a list and thinking of surprising him on his birthday. yay! Love it.

Amazing story.

NO! Don't abandon it! I check your profile everyday to see if you updated this one. I LOVE it and want to know what happens, especially with that prologue! -clings-
Keep going, keep going! nyah!

i really like it! don't abanodon it, you haven't gotten to the good part yet:)

Your A/N cleared up a lot for me. Something about this chapter felt forced, but I really have been enjoying it up until now. I am sad to know you are losing steam with this. I think, maybe if you pushed it less slowly, it might work better. There are some problems such as "Luke was apathetic, he didn't have an opinion" no need to define apathetic. Anyway, I DO like this story, as I said. Sorry if I was harsh, I'm a film major: used to giving harsh critiques (and getting them!)

This is an amazing story. I mean, It just sounds awesome.

Please continue. I want to hear about the b-day!

I think that Luke has a very mean father. Or is it maybe that he doesn't want grand-children cuz it'll make him feel old?

And you CANNOT abandon this...not until I can make something out of Luke's remeniscene about Ruby. I'm thinking rape is involved, but that's just me...

Yay an update! I really do like this story. Continue

Wo0o0o0o0t!

I knew it! Oh man, that was so amazing...

You're updating tomorrow, right?

HA! I so saw that one coming!

Okay... More to come soon I hope.

ahh a review actually using this account. Anyway the review: excellent as always. Lots of big events going on. Can't wait til next chapter. Now I gotta do some other reviews on ffn XD