 Random-Idiocity 2007-11-09 . chapter 1this was great, Keep it Up! thanks for the review |
 Love in the Roses(logged out) 2007-02-03 . chapter 1 Cold and pretty. Its image seems fitting in the cold February my part of the wold is having!
Rose |
 Guardrail 2007-01-21 . chapter 1Nicely written, great image. Keep it up! |
 Counting Petals 2007-01-21 . chapter 1I like the image of "whispering cold chills" there at the end. I loved it! |
 greenGalilee 2007-01-19 . chapter 1A bit spooky.
I like it. |
 Dale Christopher 2007-01-19 . chapter 1Vivid imagery. Very well thought out and written.
Daze |
 Basara 2007-01-10 . chapter 1coldy nice... |
 burning in effigy 2007-01-07 . chapter 1lovely imagery; i can totally picture this
the last line was creepy (in a good way) and overall, this haiku gave a chill running up my spine.. sort of like a cold but peaceful poem
great job :) |