|Reviews for Whore|
| chrisertastic 6/9/07 . chapter 1
this is bloody wicked.
| she smolders 4/13/07 . chapter 1
This makes me think of something that happened to me today. In my computer programming class, I took a little break to read some lovely poems on FictionPress, and the girl sitting next to me looks at my screen and says in a distainful voice, "You're reading poetry? Why?". That hurt a lot.
When I read about this girl you describe, she sounds so broken and your descriptions make her feel so real. It hurts me even more sometimes that 'hallowed out eyes' really can make some more alluring and the last line broke my heart. This poem is amazing and the analogy is so beautiful in a sad way. Take care.
| AllyCred 2/2/07 . chapter 1
I love it.
This is very funny!
And so true.
| bitterlyysweetchoco 2/2/07 . chapter 1
hahahahha this is brilliant! I like the message here.
"If I weren't a poet I'd be a whore"
Is that what this poem is about?
Love it. It's a great piece.
(this is the second story of yours on my fave stories list.)
| Vira Fern 1/28/07 . chapter 1
"Your secrets are worth more than your body".
How utterly delicious.
Live, Love, Write.
| MarvellousMarvin 1/28/07 . chapter 1
that's really impressive. its so harsh, and such an interesting idea, and kind of eloquent in its simplicity
| L. Cybert 1/16/07 . chapter 1
Wow. That hurt. Thanks.
| The Angry Black Woman 1/11/07 . chapter 1
| Centaurrius 1/7/07 . chapter 1
I'm conflicted as to how to tell you how much I enjoyed that in the most eloquent way I can muster, but your poem seems to have stripped me of my large vocabulary. So I'll just say it. I. LOVED. THAT. )