First, I'll thank you for your reviews-- you seem to put enough sincerity and thought into your reviews of "The End Result of Love" and "Juicyfruit" to sink a thousand "wow, excellent" reviews. They made my respective days. :)

Now, on to your poem. I'm guessing you write prose more than poetry, just because of the line breaks and your prosaic structure. Of course, I could be wrong, and you could be rolling your eyes right now, because I've offended the hard-core poet of the new year. I have a preference for shorter poems and more line breaks, but seeing as how this reads like a series of sentences, your style is more appropriate. You have some excellent imagery in here, particularly "And I can repeat myself/ all over your body" and many interesting phrases, especially the irony-laden "Please be more specific next time", which I smiled at. Not a bad poem, just not my style. I like a great deal of the components though, and the amount of work put in is evident. Congrats. `~bella~`

it puts a lot of sorrow in my eyes