So far fantastic, has me completles drawn in. I realy like the charachters, especially Lanyena and Jasper. My only critque is why is jasper getting drunk everynight trying to forget the past. why was Jasper even there in the tunnels watching this amazing women kill orcs. I hope you keep jasper in the story. Thats the only problem go from charachter to charachter and getting into them.. it makes the story jump a little

I loved the description as you go along, the swamp and the village. I also like how you slowley expand the world to the readers, its history, pain, the gods, war, scarred lands.

looking forward to an update