good story! cant wait for more

Sounds interesting, it's a great start. Can't wait for an update :)

I think you're doing a great job for your first fictionpress. It's awesome. I find it hilariously funny how she talks to the reader. Update soon!

woulda fooled me. if u write this good for your first story your other stories are gonna be great. anysway this first chapter is hilarious i loved it. and she is so random i love it! please update soon!

hahahaha its so funny! i love romance/humor stories coz they always surprise you :P this is awesome! keep writing..and you sorrta cant tell that its your first story..but not much :D

jaz -xx

I love Ryan and I think she is cute.

Peeing problem ahem was hilarious.

Keep writing...