Well, I've said before that I like your style very much, same here. Wonderful idea, perhaps one of the most original romantic shortstory I've ever read!

GAH! you know every time i get an alert that you have a new story, it always gives me this giddy feeling, and then when i come to the end every time- i never know whether to smile or cry, so i do a little of both. lol. it's so stupid, but that's how much i love your writing. and for once a fully happy ending! yay! (though don't get me wrong- i love those bittersweet onces just as much!)

i know i never give you much in the way of constructive criticism or anything, but your stories always touch me and your words are always GORGEOUS! in the end, i'm pretty much left breathless. :)

I love it! Very nice, a very sweet story. And look there! A happy ending. Well done.