This is wonderful...I've always thought that sea and beds go well together. "Feathersanded beach" is beautifully striking.

The images in this piece are absolutly amazing. I love the lines "The better to ease my fall from dreams." Its so beautiful!

Wow, you took such a thing as losing one's dreams and made it such a soft surrender. This is what I like about your style most, I tend to be coarse and unyielding, while you are able to explain things with subtle grace, without lessening the emotional punch. This is one of my favorites :)

Oh, beautiful piece. I love the second stanza especially, and the phrase "feathersanded beach" is one of my favorites in the piece. Wonderful and makes me want to go slip into bed myself. Keep writing! :)

A dream-like and fantastical piece of poetry. Much enjoyed it. The wording is... soft, like (as you say) a pillow. Wonderful stuff.

P.S.: I think I've said it before, but thank you once again for the continous reviews. They are greatly appreciated and I (seeing my own reviewing) am not sure I deserve it. But thank you.

A riddle of a poem, that leaves me feeling introspective and feathery. Beautiful.