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| Mandy Kay Miller 2007-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseWhat a lovely short story! I like how it was so poetic. You're really great with making sure your sentences flow, great structure, incredible word-choice. Again, a gorgeous piece. :) |
| Noihseret 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abusewhat a beautiful story. you have such an amazing talent for writing. this hooked me in from the very beginning. ^^ I can't wait to read more works from you by the way... I read the other review this recieved and it made me curious... what does your name mean? I know a bit of Greek but I could not figure it out. |
| Frore 2007-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI can not wait to see how your writing style evolves with time. It has an poetic, erudite feel, and while many of the comparisons in this piece have been used before, the image it put in my mind was so nice. Especially when she was lying above his grave. I am reminded of Arwen? Haha... God, it must be sad that I knew what your name meant the first time I saw it many months back. Geek is engrained in my DNA. But you have a wonderful collection of stories! |