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| Carmel March 2008-10-11 ch 11,  | abuseAh, I love this! This is quite an addicting story :) Your characters are so realistic, and your narration makes me just want to read for days. I can't wait for more! ~Carm~ |
| Vampire0175 2008-09-29 ch 11, | abuseAwesome story so far! I really love it! Please update soon! Can't wait! -Raven |
| KiraLove 2008-09-20 ch 11, | abuseWonderful. I love your story its so very unique. --Kira Love |
| DesertShadowDragon 2008-09-08 ch 11, | abuseHi I have only just started to read your story, and I think its great. Things are getting interesting and now Im stuck on a cliff-hanger, so I hope you updated your story soon. Keep writing! |
| TrixInTreats 2008-08-27 ch 11, | abuseupdate...update...update! geez womn, you take forever =] the tension...oh the conflict. |
| Keilyn 2008-08-26 ch 11, | abuseIt was a pretty good chapter. But now we need a nice long, drama filled chapter 12 :D The suspense and wait is killing me. :O Love the story. |
| teagarden 2008-08-26 ch 11, | abuseExcellent chapter! I can't wait for the next one. Please don't wait so long to udate this time. |
| de6789 2008-08-26 ch 11, | abuseGah! why the hell would you do this to me? update NOW!! write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more write more! |
| madeyes61 2008-08-25 ch 11, | abuseI'm so looking forward to the next chapter! Who is Lana going to choose? I vote for Lucna because even though he is a jerk. He's so sweet and turns into a wolf! |
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2008-08-25 ch 11, | abuselove the update cant wait for more hope you update soon! --ifly*hugs* *ps go good guys!* |
| The Latest Plague 2008-08-25 ch 11, | abuseokay... i dont get the kissing part with Jayce... she likes the kiss, and feels the attraction but every other action besides with her mouth is "against her will" or "involuntary". i really dont understand it. but whatever.. i probably misread something in on of the other chapters that explained it. lol |
| Jenn 2008-08-25 ch 11, anon. | abuseHaha. Oliver is awesome! Maybe she should just run away with him and forget about Jayce and Lucan. xD |
| jenjen-0 2008-08-25 ch 11, | abuseAhh I've waited forever for you to update! But it's always worth the wait :P Loved the retarded jokes! Can't wait for the next update!! |
| MidnightThief15 2008-08-25 ch 11, | abuseWhat on Earth are you talking about? That was SO not short! Even if you didn't like it, I did. I loved the jokes, they were funny-stupid, and quite entertaining. Lol. I can't wait until the next chapter! I wanna see how Lucan and Lana react to seeing each other. And how Jayce will be. XD |
| sungirl224 2008-08-24 ch 11, | abuseha ya this is actually the SECOND time i put in a review b4 realizing thre was more to the stry... oops ;) i really like this and will def. be reading more... im guessing there is a stry behind the entire (MOO) thing? |