The sound, and the reversal of sound flow in this is marvelous. I like the pace of this, with the hesitations that exist from the inversions. Very well written and thought provoking.

This has this very strong feeling of currents pulling me back and forth, and I do think that's what you were attempting in the writing of this piece, am I right? The title really does fit the poem, and you execute the feeling of "headiness" very well. Fabulously crafted. Keep writing! :)