This is one of my favorite things that you have written. I still have this saved on my computer and every once in a while I come across it.
You're right - you have discovered what is the epitome of beauty.

This is lovely. It's borderline poetry, which I happen to be very fond of. It's very effective in that it tells an engaging story at the same time that it gives your thoughts. Too many people, when challenging various aspects of our culture, simply list their opinions. They argue. This passage, however, entertains while communicating your opinions. Excellent job.