WHAT?

THAT IS SO ** SAD!!

:((

Oh very nice one shot. It was very cute and yet sad. I love how you wrote it, nice format. XD Lovely, lovely on shot.

That was a pretty cute one shot. Truth and dare always does cause so many problems...

All I have to say is: "AW!" Cute, cute, cute. I know how it feels to hold back how you really feel. Good portrayal.

One thing I have to mention though. I've been reading your stuff, and it's just the thing about popularity. Perhaps instead of outright saying she's popular, you can describe it? Maybe make it seem more modest instead of blatantly saying that their on top of the social ladder. Just a suggestion. ^^;

Keep up the good work!
-Just Breathing AKA: stemunie_xx from reviewers found

The premise of the story is good in the sense that the question of "Who do you like" has plagued youths for ages now. I suggest you don't split up every sentence into a separate paragraph though, it makes it a bit choppy. To understand the flow of a story, paragraph structure and story structure is just as important as the story itself. When you split up every sentence, the importance of the paragraph is shattered and loses meaning.
Also, I would suggest more of an explanation concerning setting. I was a little confused after you said that the main talk at SCHOOL was about you, then all of a sudden you were playing Truth or Dare, most likely not at school although I can't be certain.
Again, your ideas are very solid, just a few minor details to touch up. I hope this helps! Keep at it!

ahh what a one shot! im sure uve had so many ppl ask so how did it end. Did she kiss Chris?Richard seemed unaffected by her truth so i guess she would nt kiss him or would she? lol good one shot

oh and this is itse from reviewers found

Hey! My first review of your stories...I really like it.(: Very sad, though. It's just so frustrating that we throw away opportunites like that...isn't it? Anyway, like I said It was great and I loved the way it was written.

Oh, good story! You have a few grammar problems here and there, but nothing major. Also, this story could easily be elaborated into a full fic. I was kinda' unsatisfied with the ending. What happens later? What does Richard think of this whole situation? How will he react? You can post up another chapter about it.
Still, all-in-all, this was a great story with a great plot.
~Hawkdancer from reviewers_found

This was a heartbreaking story, but at the same time wanted to make me scream at the girl's stupidity. She lied to him, so how could she be surprised that Richard moved on with his life. Clearly she can't make up her mind, so it's hard to feel sympathy for her. I loved the imagery and the description you used in this piece. Great work and I hope to see more from you soon.

oh my lord! i love it so much already! you're a wonderful writer! ppmstasap! (Please Post More Sooner Than As Soon As Possible!

w8, could I, just try, to print a copy of this... too bad my friend couldn't read this, but before she misses her chance... so... please?

it's actually good, and realistic, making it better. she can relate, the missed part at least... anywho, thanks