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| Mercyette 2008-01-29 ch 1,  | abuseAw, that makes me sad...in a good kinda way since I'm the reader! Sadly, things like that are always happening. I like how you had the voice of God telling her that she didn't have to go through with it. The only thing I might suggest is that between the two voices, you might want to put regular text, just so that its clearer to the reader. Anyway, great job! ^.^ |
| Demon Hunter JAD 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's like whoever is bulimic is trying to stop. It's awesome! |
| Joanna Johnson 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseVery powerful! One of my friends does this. I'll reffer her to this page and hopefully it will bless her like it blessed me. :D |
| Arafax 2007-01-08 ch 1, | abuseGood. While I cannot exactly relate to the situation described in this piece, I can easily change a few words and it relates quite well me. Nice job. |