Wow... I mean... I just... wow.

Wow, that was quite the story. It would have been nice to see her interact more with Lucas, though. He seemed like a pretty deep guy.

ahh! Can you make them somehow UN-brother and sister. I want this couple to last. PLEASE? You're killing me! I love them together. can you do more girl/girl too? I think the plot could go deeper with her friends. I don't read alot of smut but I think that this story is really good. Usually, I'd lose interest or be turned off but...KEEP WRITING! (:

Hmm... for the longest time, I was rooting for Rick. XD I always liked Lucus, from the beginning, but I always ended up rooting for Rick. I'm a sucker for a good muscian... then he turned out all bleh when he had the chance! Man! I just wanted to ... KICK HIM!

Anyway... pretty good. I enjoyed reading this story. ^.~

**-ing Hot. Seriously. I wish I could write a longer review, but I need to ... yeah... work off some of that tension.

wow! is all abou the only thing i can think of. i loved it. not just because of the sex it features. but the romance formed amongst each character. The fact that Lucas was this well formed violent character, and yet he was the one Liyla felt most content with. i couldnt wuite understand why christie and shawna were so involved... did they end up being lesbian? or did they like like the girl on girl action for entertainment... i thought at one stage they were just best mates... nothing further... but they developed an intimate relationship, if you can call it that. i think my favourite character was Lucas. he was a hard guy but soft on the inside. and gee didnt Cactus turn out to be a bit of a schitzo! i thought he was the nice guy, so it turns out he's the sexed up pervert.
nah i really liked the whole story and the fact that you said it had no immediate plaot. it was just wonderful.. its like you could find some sort of relation to each and every character.
i cant wait to read Sand Ghost. sounds exciting :D
anyway, if you could get back to me on the girls' situatuion that would be cool.
once3 again, great story. loved every minute reading it!
thanks
jackie

I do think that it's nice you're exploring the realm of erotic romanticism instead of the opposite but I do like this story. It is told through the eyes of a teenager, and they're more prone to find a thrill in dirty words.

simple review.

i love Lucas.

pretty good :)

Great story; good work; not my the expected ending but still good, ^_^; keep up the good work.

ok...that was wierd...please tell me that she doesn't end up with her BROTHER!

I really enjoyed this. I hope you're planning on writing more. That would be awesome!

1 A.M. now, so I can't make this review long. I just wanted to say that this is pretty much a sick and twisted story that I spent an hour reading. It was like, "WHAM BAM THANK YOU MA'AM." Ahahaha. That's not to say that it's a BAD thing, but I'm not sure if it's a good thing for me, either. I'll dissect this tomorrow.

Just know that, once again, your last chapter was uh-mazing. My favorite chapter, probably because the sex scenes weren't so graphic, LOL! I am such a noob.

Anyways. I'll dissect it more tomorrow with a longass review. Right now, gotta delve into Catch-22!

-Nghi

Hm...

Interesting.

Perhaps slightly repetitive at times, but that's not a bad thing.

Reminiscent of Anais Nin's "Delta of Venus", one of my favorite short story collections of all time (my boyfriend calls me weird, yes). If you haven't read it I recommend it highly.

Generally well done. Impressive effort.

This was SUCH a GREAT ending! ^_^ I think my favorite character was by far Anthony. I dunno why. He just rocked my world. The way you wrote his character was awesome. You have some real talent! All in all, vair awesome!
~Kristine