hey did this story up and die no updates for anything well any way update something or start a new story about us cuz i like our storys

ok here i go my honest opinion a bit short but i understand your pressed for time school running out and all i will take a bit but i'll revise it k so anyways i found out the truth afully quick you usealy drag something like that out a little i thought so when you do fix it it will be awesome i just know it cuz this was definently not your best work and if you don't mind they blocked hot mail on the laptops so if you get the chance go to my email and find out what my password for fictionpress is i want to update my story well later

look kingy your going to make hate you all i have to look foreword to all day is looking at your story and telling you if their crapy or not update or you will make me very uoset i might lose interest all to gether now you wouldn't want me to doo that would youso UPDATE NOW

awesome update soon later gotta go study for my law studies test tomorrow

I enjoyed this. Keep up the good work.

woot! I finally finished the damn prologue. I sure hope the rest is short. But it was pretty good.

and i told you to stop buggin me about chapter 3, lover. Don't make me get the cleaver again. I should have it up soon... maybe Valentine'd day the latest. Kisses.

-Shimo