 Edraith 2007-10-21 . chapter 1This is truly beautiful. I feel the same way about some of my friends. I like the care and love expressed in your poem, and the fact that the speaker points their friend to God in the first place. |
 concerto49 2007-08-17 . chapter 1Very spiritual and many god-references.
Hm it's cheerful though, which is good.
It's always good to have hope.
Anyhow. Cheers. |
 Pheobe Meryll 2007-05-28 . chapter 1This was sweet...and well written. It didn't have a lot of rhythm to it (poetry and rhythm are inseparable in my mind), but it was a good start. Keep writing! |
 Sarah C 2007-01-09 . chapter 1 I really enjoyed reading this. It spoke to me alot. Its a very deep and honest poem and i find it hard to believe its your first attempt! |
 citrus traffic 2007-01-08 . chapter 1I love the simplistic beauty of this peice. For a first attempt I definately got to say, you got talent! Please keep up the great work!
Happy Writing
PottersSweetie17 |
 Ben Wood 2007-01-08 . chapter 1 Hey Dom, this is great! Good theme... solid content. I would say more about the technical end of things if I had any idea what I was talking about. Haha! Well, keep it up! I'm looking forward to the release of your big project (sometime in the next couple of years!). |
 Getuie 2007-01-08 . chapter 1Quite a good first attempt. Welcome to the world of poetry... I can already imagine challenging you to write some of those instead of the stories we've been working on :P I'll just do what I did with one of my friends and start talking in rhyme... hehehe
The poem is very open and honest... which I like. I like open poems, they're just easier to understand and relate to.
Hope this won't be the last we see of your poetry. |