This is truly beautiful. I feel the same way about some of my friends. I like the care and love expressed in your poem, and the fact that the speaker points their friend to God in the first place.

Very spiritual and many god-references.
Hm it's cheerful though, which is good.
It's always good to have hope.
Anyhow. Cheers.

This was sweet...and well written. It didn't have a lot of rhythm to it (poetry and rhythm are inseparable in my mind), but it was a good start. Keep writing!

I really enjoyed reading this. It spoke to me alot. Its a very deep and honest poem and i find it hard to believe its your first attempt!

I love the simplistic beauty of this peice. For a first attempt I definately got to say, you got talent! Please keep up the great work!
Happy Writing
PottersSweetie17

Hey Dom, this is great! Good theme... solid content. I would say more about the technical end of things if I had any idea what I was talking about. Haha! Well, keep it up! I'm looking forward to the release of your big project (sometime in the next couple of years!).

Quite a good first attempt. Welcome to the world of poetry... I can already imagine challenging you to write some of those instead of the stories we've been working on :P I'll just do what I did with one of my friends and start talking in rhyme... hehehe

The poem is very open and honest... which I like. I like open poems, they're just easier to understand and relate to.

Hope this won't be the last we see of your poetry.