Beautiful... ^_^
I'm happy!
Thanks so much for the read! I'm going to bookmark this, and it might save me one night when I feel like I'm going to die from work. :P :D

o_O what about Ephram? He didn't say anything! And that was an intense display of affection from Harrison...

Anyway, hi. Thanks for the story! It's been soo good right now. I didn't even want to stop for reviews. =P Haha, sorry.

truly one of my favorites

I truly and absolutely loved this story! I would read it again and again.. My only complaints would be tiny spelling, grammatical errors and tenses.. But, those could be easily fixed. And, once, you add more information here and there in a few chapters, this story would definitely be publish worthy, and I do not kid about that.. I am very serious.. I loved this, and would buy it if it ever showed up in the stores.

Absolutely fantastic.

Im reading this and i really like it... I read heaps of stories but only good ones so the fact that yours caught my attention and that i am still reading it is a good thing.

amazing, simply amazing. I love Molly and Harrison.

aw
too cute for words
i knew they'd end up together in the end.
loved it.
i would have reviewed yesterday before you put out the last couple chapters, but i didn't get time.
so totally going on my favourites.

izzie

bah-horrible cliffy. horrible.

btw, are all the chapter names with the numbers in front of them supposed to be lines from a poem? cuz it kind of feels as if. if so, it's a nice poem so far. if not, well, it still is. :p

as for some critiquing: you've got a few grammatical mistakes in your story, and the characters are kind of iffy at times, too; i know they're your characters, but it just seems like they get out of character at times...>_> do you get what i mean? probably not. blah.

only 12 reviews for this thing? no wai.

-:colorlessdillusion:-

Wow that was one heck of a chapter. But I guess those are guys for you. Always jumping to conclusions. But what i really want to know it what Ephram was thinking about the pregnacy when they hadn't even slept together? Did he maybe think that she was cheating on him . . . . oh the possibilities. And I think what Harrison planned was wonderful. If that isnt a sign of true, unrealised love, then what is? Anyway, glad you updated. Good writing. Hope you get the X on your keybored fixed soon:)

I'm glad that you are updating the story again, I love it...please keep going.

Thank you for updating. This is one of my favorite stories. Please keep up the good work!

Now, I havent read all of this yet (I have only gotten to chapter four) but i saw at the beginning of a chapter when you asked if anyone was reading and was shocked to find you had only eight reviews. Well, I just wanted you to know that i love the story so far and i would love it if you were to update. I love that you were willing to take a chance and write with older characters while everyone else just goes for the younger characters.

man this is one majorly twisted love octagon, ok maybe not that extreme but its weird..and i like it... cheers

You make me happy. This story does need to pick up a bit and I'm very glad it's starting to. YAY!