Reviews for The Gravity of Love

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Elizabeth07 2007-12-21 ch 24,	abuseI truly and absolutely loved this story! I would read it again and again.. My only complaints would be tiny spelling, grammatical errors and tenses.. But, those could be easily fixed. And, once, you add more information here and there in a few chapters, this story would definitely be publish worthy, and I do not kid about that.. I am very serious.. I loved this, and would buy it if it ever showed up in the stores.
Briah Keegan 2007-09-07 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely fantastic.
j.m.burford 2007-08-24 ch 6,	abuseIm reading this and i really like it... I read heaps of stories but only good ones so the fact that yours caught my attention and that i am still reading it is a good thing.
sweetone0018 2007-04-13 ch 24,	abuseamazing, simply amazing. I love Molly and Harrison.
Oooh.Look.A Cat 2007-04-01 ch 24,	abuseaw too cute for words i knew they'd end up together in the end. loved it. i would have reviewed yesterday before you put out the last couple chapters, but i didn't get time. so totally going on my favourites. izzie
timeaftertime 2007-04-01 ch 22,	abusebah-horrible cliffy. horrible. btw, are all the chapter names with the numbers in front of them supposed to be lines from a poem? cuz it kind of feels as if. if so, it's a nice poem so far. if not, well, it still is. :p as for some critiquing: you've got a few grammatical mistakes in your story, and the characters are kind of iffy at times, too; i know they're your characters, but it just seems like they get out of character at times...>_> do you get what i mean? probably not. blah. only 12 reviews for this thing? no wai. -:colorlessdillusion:-
Nourgelitnius 2007-03-29 ch 16,	abuseWow that was one heck of a chapter. But I guess those are guys for you. Always jumping to conclusions. But what i really want to know it what Ephram was thinking about the pregnacy when they hadn't even slept together? Did he maybe think that she was cheating on him . . . . oh the possibilities. And I think what Harrison planned was wonderful. If that isnt a sign of true, unrealised love, then what is? Anyway, glad you updated. Good writing. Hope you get the X on your keybored fixed soon:)
valentinesquirt 2007-03-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm glad that you are updating the story again, I love it...please keep going.
valentinesquirt 2007-03-28 ch 15, anon.	abuseThank you for updating. This is one of my favorite stories. Please keep up the good work!
Nourgelitnius 2007-03-28 ch 13,	abuseNow, I havent read all of this yet (I have only gotten to chapter four) but i saw at the beginning of a chapter when you asked if anyone was reading and was shocked to find you had only eight reviews. Well, I just wanted you to know that i love the story so far and i would love it if you were to update. I love that you were willing to take a chance and write with older characters while everyone else just goes for the younger characters.
eliza-smiles 2007-02-15 ch 12,	abuseman this is one majorly twisted love octagon, ok maybe not that extreme but its weird..and i like it... cheers
SongShadow 2007-02-02 ch 11, anon.	abuseYou make me happy. This story does need to pick up a bit and I'm very glad it's starting to. YAY!
tornangelwings 2007-02-01 ch 11,	abuseaww thats so sweet grins wildly i really hope you continue, lets see what happens now, i hop harry see the erro of his way sits by computer waiting for the next update
SongShadow20 2007-01-13 ch 6,	abuseOf course I'm reading, I've just been MIA for a few days, but when I came back it was like a big present. Three chapters! YAY! The bills one seemed a bit wordy. Show us, don't tell us, but otherwise I still love it!
Dragonweave 2007-01-13 ch 6,	abuseI'm reading!! i adore it. the whole brusing thing, its like "we live dangerously" and aww its so sweet!! i'm freaking myself out here.

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