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Reviews For: Lost Dreams

worstwriteronfic
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is freakishly weird for me. Don't get me wrong, the story is awesome. I was talking about the characters name. My real name is Andrea. My bestfriend's name is Jessica and we met at the hospital.
The Night Mayor
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseoh my god...
i ** cried like a baby...
it made me call MY girlfriend and tell her that i love her...at three in the morning ><
she wasnt please, but she said she loved me too :)
so thats what counts.

and yeah, as other reviewers have said, you mixed up jessica and andrea near the end.
ComatoseInsomniac
2007-09-15
ch 1,
abuseAnother awesome story but I would never have expected otherwise.
This is the second or third story I've read of yours and once again it made me cry. Your work never ceases to amaze me.

There was a slight mix-up near the end with Jessica's and Andrea's names which caused me to think she'd woken up though.
Sugarous
2007-06-11
ch 1,
abuseOh God. Your stories are awesome. This one made me cry. I thought Andrea would wake up in the end, but in the end she dies. So sad... but so romantic at the same time.

Keep up the good stories!
IAMySelf
2007-05-13
ch 1,
abuseThis is a good story.
But a couple errors.
Many times you replaced the name Andrea as Jessica's.
It was semi confusing.
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