This was a beautiful story. I loved it and it was very well written. My only suggestion would be to make the dialogue between the characters smoother.

I actually thought Alice wasn't going to fess up at first. The last part made me cry (yet again...).

Oh, my, GOD! This was so beautiful it made me cry x.x I thought of my girlfriend and what would happen if I left her like that so it really got to me. I started crying and was almost afraid you'd leave the end as a tragedy. She got closure, the end! But no, you gave her the love of her life back and I couldn't ask for more 3 Thank you.

Beautiful story. Truly heartbreaking and breathtaking. Just to let you know I broke down in sobs. Thanks for sharing this one shot with your readers. You did an excellent job.

wow...i actaully think i cried at the end bit...i loved the whole story from beginning to end

keep up the gd work...:Dxx

Such a well written story.

I was hooked from begining to end.

I could learn a thing or two from you.

Beautiful.

a truly beautiful story 3 I loved it very much!

:O OMGLJ! That was so friggin AMAZING! :O Im Just... :O Im Friggin Speechless ! :O

So many very well dones1 :D :O :)

D: i hate you... you made me cry! DX but i loved it. a part of me expected lucy to be alive, but the chances kept going down as i read... _ god i hate crying...

I actually read this yesterday, and it's been swimming around in my head ever since. I LOVE this story! It's amazing! Great job!

I like this story a lot it's very interesting, and not that far fetched, I mean before I realized I was gay, I had so many "gay encounters" (protests, speeches for pro-marriage etc.) and yet it still took me by surprise lol. I liked it though nice

Very beautiful one-shot :) I really enjoyed reading it and I'm so glad that they found together in the end. I'm a sucker for happy-endings :P

Loved your story, would love if you would consider being on my staff for my C2 and write more yuri or yaoi romance.

That was an awesome story. Very moving.