D: i hate you... you made me cry!! DX but i loved it. a part of me expected lucy to be alive, but the chances kept going down as i read... >_< god i hate crying...

I actually read this yesterday, and it's been swimming around in my head ever since. I LOVE this story! It's amazing! Great job!

I like this story a lot it's very interesting, and not that far fetched, I mean before I realized I was gay, I had so many "gay encounters" (protests, speeches for pro-marriage etc.) and yet it still took me by surprise lol. I liked it though nice

Very beautiful one-shot :) I really enjoyed reading it and I'm so glad that they found together in the end. I'm a sucker for happy-endings :P

Loved your story, would love if you would consider being on my staff for my C2 and write more yuri or yaoi romance.

That was an awesome story. Very moving.

Wow... this is absolutely wonderful. I love it! Your writing is great, a lot better than most people on here, and grammatically correct (yayy!). Great job at this, and despite what Lucy's father did, I'm glad for the happy ending.
Peace

this was a magnificent and very inspiring story. i love it.


-teri :]

That brought a tear to my eyes it was a complete emotional rollercoaster. The fact that the scars and burns meant nothing to Alice shows the deepness of the love she feels. A perfect love in an imperfect world.

^_^ Very cute story! I'm so glad Lucy wasn't dead. That was an interesting twist, having her get disfigured by fire. I'm happy that Alice wasn't shallow and horrified by it.

*Tear* That was great! I loved it! I was a really touching story.

As I was reading this story-which, by the way, is very beautiful-I couldn't help but feel a sort of connection to Lucy, because I'm a sort-of amateur playwrite (I don't write much, because it's all shit) and I'm a very out-you could say flaming, no pun intended-bi (most people have no idea I'm any different from them, and it kills me) so I really felt moved by how this whole thing came around.

I loved how Alice developed, and I'm really glad they have a future together.

F.F.

This is an extremely well-written story... I commend you(:
I was captivated by the characters, and the storyline. Great job, wonderful work.

this is the second time i've read this and no matter how many times i read it, it is beautiful every time. I love this story.

This story is amazing, a true work or art. Bravo.