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| Cross Rose 2008-02-02 ch 1,   | I really liked this one, it was a bit depressing, but it hit's a spot. You know? Hey, could you please check out some of my poems? Thank you. |
| animegirl777 2007-01-08 ch 1, | No-One is perfect. No-One seem not to exist(thus the name) the poem's rhythm is comfortable, a hard thing to accomplish. good job |
| 123454321 2007-01-08 ch 1, | I like it all except the 4th line "you yelp and yelp". That one felt like a stretch to me. -J.A. |