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no.peace.los.angeles 2007-01-09 . chapter 1
This does very much read like an outcry of some form, with the orders to let people or things do whatever it is that they're doing. It's a nice piece, with good form. Keep writing! :)
Moondog Dozier 2007-01-08 . chapter 1
Excellent sound and flow. I like how you've used the first word in the line structure to concentrate the progression. Well written.
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