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| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-01-09 ch 1, | This does very much read like an outcry of some form, with the orders to let people or things do whatever it is that they're doing. It's a nice piece, with good form. Keep writing! :) |
| Moondog Dozier 2007-01-08 ch 1, | Excellent sound and flow. I like how you've used the first word in the line structure to concentrate the progression. Well written. |