Reviews for An introspective outcry

no.peace.los.angeles 2007-01-09 ch 1,	This does very much read like an outcry of some form, with the orders to let people or things do whatever it is that they're doing. It's a nice piece, with good form. Keep writing! :)
Moondog Dozier 2007-01-08 ch 1,	Excellent sound and flow. I like how you've used the first word in the line structure to concentrate the progression. Well written.