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| lordelfy 2007-02-09 ch 1,   | hm this reminds me of new relationships or building up to one. I really like the way this is written. |
| Shookie-Monster Elephant Ma... 2007-01-26 ch 1, | very nice, i can feel the emotion. keep writing. thanks for the review! what branch JROTC do yall have? --Shookie Smiles Sweetly |
| Dawn-N-Dusk44 2007-01-26 ch 1, | There are a few lines that I really like in this. Great job =) |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-01-21 ch 1, | "I wanted to get to know you Inside of my own dreams" I really like those lines. Good job =) ~Black and White Dreams~ |
| Lacrymosa 2007-01-10 ch 1, | I like this. Good Job. -Chloe |
| i.am.the.winter 2007-01-08 ch 1, | it's good. and i say that a lot but it is. :) i especially like the "just like in the magazine" line...so keep it up. -- i.am.the.winter |