hm this reminds me of new relationships or building up to one. I really like the way this is written.

very nice, i can feel the emotion.
keep writing.
thanks for the review!
what branch JROTC do yall have?
--Shookie Smiles Sweetly

There are a few lines that I really like in this. Great job =)

"I wanted to get to know you

Inside of my own dreams"

I really like those lines. Good job =)

~Black and White Dreams~

I like this. Good Job.

-Chloe

it's good. and i say that a lot but it is. :) i especially like the "just like in the magazine" line...so keep it up.

-- i.am.the.winter