l love the idea for this story!
Its a new and original dragon, fastasy story.
I'm get sick of reading fastasy story that are just about the same, this is a good change.
Also you don't reveal everthing in one big go.

Alright, not wanting to admit love fair enough, but that is just a little too close not to know the other feels the same way. maybe change it a little so it's not quite so obvious

Happy happy day, very good, love in the group this is going to be interesting

Wait a minute, i am a little confused, what dragon is Alessa?

I really like your story, the dragons are really cool and i would love to have a small dragon for a pet.

The thing about the sunset/sunrise place is that the sun rises in the east and sets in the west so the sunset/sunrise place would have to be either one or the other.

I really like this story. I've gotten to the legend continued chapter and I reall like it. The legends also make good stories to tell to kids who I babysit.

yeah... it was short... but it's ok ^^. I'm excited to see(/read) other kingdoms too. That should be interesting and maybe we get to meet new characters as well...? Probably.

Good job, see ya!

It is pretty good so far. You have some words with the first or last letter left off. It doesn't interpt the reading though. Thanks for telling how to pronounce Telpe. Who and where is Jay's dragon now?

Cool :p More please :p

Don't worry if your chapters are a bit short. As I've said sometime earlier, not to you but someone else, it's better to update often with shorter chapters than very seldom (as I do, damnit), even if it was with longer chapters. Besides, many find it easier to concentrate on reading shorter chapters.

Anyway, I was surprised to find that you've updated twice since I last checked my e-mail. I'm pretty sure I'll keep up with the updates better once my exams are over soon.

Now, on to the actual review part. I didn't mind at all that the last chapter concentrated more on Azure and Sorrow. I can't help being more interested in them than what happens to Alyssa :D. I'm sorry, I know that's not what's intented.

One thing I started wondering when you mentioned that Alyssa's training has been going on for three years already. That makes her nineteen, if I'm not wrong? So I got interested in how old the rest are? I can't remember you ever giving their ages.

Yay! New chapter :D

Very good. I like it :p

I liked it. Too short though :p :D And yes you should definatley continue "Fade to Silver" :p

Well, it's kinda difficult to say if you're making Alyssa too powerful or not at this point because the story has just begun. Try to not make her involved with everything that happens. But, by any means, I'm not saying it's bad, just wanting to give a friendly advice to watch that. You're doing well.

What I enjoyed reading this chapter the most was that it went a little deeper into the lives of the other characters, as well. I liked that you introduced more human sides of all Azure, Spirit and Sorrow, too. The last one is definitely rising to be my favourite character.

And that leads me to my next topic: Azure and Sorrow. I think it's a lovely addition to the story and I would very much like to see their relationship developing as the story goes on.

Lastly, I am sorry for not reviewing until now. I moved and didn't have access to Internet for, like, two months.

Can't blame her I'd really,really rather not
imagine something like that either.Anyways except
for that still awsome.