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gummybaby
2008-09-28
ch 4,
abuseoh, I want to see what happens next, cuz this story's pretty awesome. yay.
heart race
2008-09-26
ch 4,
abuseI AM SO GLAD YOU ARE / THIS IS BACK
JtheChosen1
2008-09-21
ch 4,
abusedang an update AND a HUGE PLOT TWIST! man, i'm excited!
narcissistic
2008-09-21
ch 4,
abusehahaha he overreacts alot of the time...it'd be funny is he really was a terrorist. btw...FINALLY an update! i almost forgot this story was here...
Ama
2008-09-21
ch 4, anon.
abuseooh, loving it so far. :D
JtheChosen1
2008-02-26
ch 3,
abuseo wow, if my roommate had 2 spiders for pets, i would kill them if they ever got loose.

gr8 story, really comical but theres a touch of serious drama and action laced within.

since u don't want to be pestered about updating, i won't mention it *coughcough* but this story is really good!
erasmuss
2008-02-09
ch 3,
abuseSo far, this story is awesome.
i LOVE...Eugenes(?) detachment from everything. He's an airhead in my opinion. Harvey sounds cool too, though the name always reminds me of that stupid Sabrina the teenaged witch show. You write pretty well too, a lot better than a lot of the crap on FP, I am genuinely interested in this story, which is unusual. Keep up the good work and you may just have a fan ^^
Lovelove
Erasmuss
heart race
2008-02-08
ch 3,
abuseo how i missed this.
i like it. i liked the spiders. i like morgan avenue!

i really think you should write more. i don't think you suck at writing.
paputsza
2008-02-04
ch 3,
abuseno! You don't such at writing. you're hilarious. You're like one of the best out there. You'r l33t and i was just about to offer to have your babies until you denied me. gaw. Please update. PLEASE. IT's a thing WE READERs SAY. We didn't mean to offend you precious. could you update. I want you to update. you are my crack cocain. Good authors don't come around every day and you are a good author. . . as long as you don't mess up the pairings, but that's pretty simple, just make it whoever the cliffhanger*you know what those are* implies, along with the summary. They should /do it/ XD
paputsza
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseholy freak, you're a scary author... o.o update p.\\
narcissistic
2008-02-03
ch 3,
abusewow that was such a LONG wait. but the update was much appreciates! thankies. :D
Amopet4
2008-01-19
ch 2,
abuse*pouts at you* This is so good and you are a tease. More? ;)
merrymowmow
2007-10-12
ch 2,
abuseI was wondering when you're going to update?
neongoldtooth
2007-08-09
ch 2,
abusehm i like it!
Theres so many ways this can go,
and in my head i've already
planned the way I think it'll go...
but i can't wait to see what you do
with the plot.
=]
DylanTK
2007-07-11
ch 2,
abuseEr.. Ran out of room... Anyway. Where was I? Oh yeah. I wanted to ask something. What the hell does "all but" something really mean? I've never understood that figure of speech, and it tends to irk me to no end. Seriously, I'm not kidding.. I don't get it... I never have.

I keep thinking.. all but that... everything but that.. anything but that? I take it as literally as someone with Asperger's would, and it makes my head spin.
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