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| simpleplan13 2007-02-18 ch 1,  | abuseI like the second stanza's personification... I also like the repition of clueless... I love the ending as well... great piece |
| Ice and Snow 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abusei'm honored. and that is saying it dryly. You seem to be getting repetitive. But who am i to talk? |sigh| You seem to convey similar messages using subtly different words (but hey...i do that too...but whatever. i'll be a hypocrite) More color; context |