Reviews for Seraphim's Song - FictionPress.com

kloun mannequin 2007-01-09 ch 1,	abusewow, it's so sweet,that gives me hope
myalteredego 2007-01-09 ch 1,	abuseI don't know what a Seraphim's song is (curse my lack of good Enlgish classes) but this does sound somewhat like something that would be said with a melody. My advice is to work on the first three lines- either make all of them different so that they don't rhyme or change the third so that is does rhyme properly. It'll make for a smoother reading. Nice job.