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| aprettywar 2007-02-28 ch 1,   | wow. reading this, i could definitely feel emotion...almost a sad, melancholy sort of feeling. excellent work, and keep up the good work :) |
| Brighter Than Sunshine 2007-02-07 ch 1, | I like this poem a lot. It seems to have a lot of emotion behind it. Good job, and keep up the good work. |
| Toxic.Industrial.Waste 2007-01-30 ch 1, | I'm glad you explained, but sometimes I like when you don't. That way the reader can put their own emotions/feelings/experiences behind it and get a deeper feel for it, even if it's the opposite of what you were trying to get across. This I could easily see as an abusive/neglecting mother. Her child loves her desperately, but yet the child gets no response. The child is just waiting for the day the mother will put a little back. ♥ Erica Sky |
| Stripy Odd Socks 2007-01-27 ch 1, | One word: fab |