Reviews for The Keys To Her Heart

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Elly 2007-09-08 ch 12, anon.	abuseMy god. Maybe I'm a little late seeing as how you already completed the whole story, but I just have to say, I LOVED this story. I especially liked how you put both of the girls' situations in the same problems at the same time. I hope you get what I mean. Anyways, I just fell in love with this story, it's beautiful. Before I couldn't bother to make an account here, but now I am just so I can put this story on my faves :D Keep on rocking and I'm going to check if you have more stories ^_^
Lil Bazza 2007-09-03 ch 12,	abuseFirstly, I loved North and South BBC miniseries. It was as good as the book. It was amazing. And Richard Armitage is HOT in that series. I borrowed it from my friend one weekend, and it took me months to give it back to her, that's how much I loved it!! :D Secondly, this story is amazing. I want to congratulate you on how well rounded it was. There were a few moments that need a bit of tweaking, but overall, I think it is one of the better Romance stories I've read in a while. I loved the Arden/Meredith story. Mainly because it was more developed that the Harper/Hayley story. I've just checked out you're profile and I remember your other story. I loved that one!! Wait, back to this one. Hayley and Harper seemed a bit unfilfilling. I think you could have taken this so much further, but I guess this story focussed more around Arden and Meredith. I mean, you had this whole lave hate thing going, and I do love how the pair of them got together, but what happened to their performance? In a weird way I really want to know how they went. The only other issue in the story is the part with the bruises and the bathtub. I got so confused - I though I'd missed something, and maybe I have, but one minute she's about to be hit by a car and the next minute she had an abusive boyfriend. Maybe I should just go back and reread the story. Your characters had great depth and were beautifully written. Meredith was confident but insecure and Hayley was shy but assertive (that seems a bit contradictory but I think it works). You male counterparts reflected and enhanced these attributes and brought about the best of everything in the girls. Harper's reasoning for Hayley and why he loves her is so cute, and Arden is just adorable. I loved the ending. Totally sweet. You write really well. I'm very jealous. I have all these storylines running around my head and I just seem to portray them nearly half as well as you do. So I'm totally in awe. I can't wait to read something more. Keep writing - you have talent. I'm off to reread, 'I Might Love You if You'd Stop Talking" again. I did love your story. Alot. Jen.
Phantasia.89 2007-09-03 ch 1,	abuseThere's something about this piece that just struck a chord in me. It's beautiful and surreal, like a moment captured and frozen in time. Wonderfully enjoyable, and quite unique in some aspects. Good luck with your future works.
Briar Rose 05 2007-09-02 ch 12,	abuseI loved it. so now it's complete right?! i can't believe it, it was amazing! i absolutely love it! Congrats on finishing it and good luck with any of your future work!
Briar Rose 05 2007-07-31 ch 11,	abuseI love this story! it's amazing! I can't wait to read the next chapter! when is it coming out?! lol. is it really almost over? I think you can add a lot to it. explain the assignment with Hayley and Harper and then talk about the situation with Mere and Arden. Even add in something like she's inspired him to wrtie again and that's how he gets her back, by composing a piece for her... i have so many ideas... lol. if you need any help or wanna know what they are just let me know and i'll be more than glad to share. I'm a sucker for sappy-happy endings ;). anyways. keep up the good work!
Fairytale Gurl 2007-07-25 ch 11,	abuseplease update soon! i really like this! and harry potter was amazing!
dreamweaver138 2007-07-19 ch 11,	abuseheh, i thought it was another story, at least until i opened the story alert e-mail...XD anyway, hope to see the next chapter, drama >.< dreamweaver138
bold gravy 2007-07-18 ch 11,	abuseGAH! I like this story, and I love Meredith. She, like any normal human being has her flaws, but that's what makes me love her more. I really feel for her, and as much as I like Arden, I really think he's a dumbass overall.
Emilyne Willowar 2007-07-18 ch 11,	abuseThe transitions were a little difficult to follow this chapter. One minute they were in the burger place, and then suddenly they were at the apartment, and I was completely confused. (Not that this was the only place it happened, but this was just an example.) What? The story's almost over? That makes me so sad. =( Any chance of a sequel? Yay! Harry Potter! I can't wait! I'm actually kinda nervous to see who dies, though. =(
SongShadow20 2007-06-20 ch 10,	abuseI just wanted to say that I've read this story from the very beginning, but I guess I keep forgetting to review. I really love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing a great job and what I really appreciate is that your story involves music!! :) The characters make me want to laugh and punch them at the same time (if that makes any sense) haha!
unlikely.story 2007-06-03 ch 10,	abuseO, nice ending to the chapter. Good job. Update soon pretty please.
the rocket apple 2007-05-10 ch 9,	abuseI was so glad to get the update notice email thing! Good chapter; your characters are always so well-done.
RedMoonChick 2007-05-10 ch 9,	abusethis is some GOOD shit... I love the taboo stories! I lvoe teacher/student. But this is college, so its actually NOT illegal... just frowned upon. The story is really good, and I love the tension, but you jump in the timeline a lot. One chapter is all it took for Hayley and Harper to go from hating each other to being friendly. And so on... itd be better if you showed the growth between the characters... it doesnt have to be SO slow, but still a little slower. nonetheless Im really enjoying this story. Esp this chapter, Arden FINALLY gave in hahaha.
the rocket apple 2007-04-22 ch 8,	abusePo' Meredith. Nothing's going her way! Except for Arden totally falling for her... I like all of your characters. At least, the one's I'm supposed to like. For instance, I have a great affinity for Arden's brother. I love reading your stuff, and hope you update as soon as humanly possible! So good! Seriously.
Lovediamond15 2007-04-19 ch 8,	abuseo good job, i love the chapter, ^-^ well done, cant wait for more cos its fantastic!

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