|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-21 ch 1, | Nice poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| AK the Twilight 2007-03-21 ch 1, | You put an interesting twist on the classic line "home is where the heart is" and you definitely showed a good point in how it is approached. The rest of the poem tended to be rather flat, that is, less descriptions than hoped. I really like your concept, and approaching the concept with the same mindset as the beginning would likely make the poem better. Overall, though, it's a good poem. Just don't forget to tag along some descriptions too. Great job, overall. |
| mad knitter kt 2007-01-11 ch 1, | Almost childlike, but a touch bittersweet. Can't say I like your use of capitals that much, but then again, it's my personal preference to like poetry without bolding or odd capitalization or italics. Nice to have a poem from you once in a while. You don't really write them (as far as I know) that often. keep writing! |