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Reviews For: Where the heart is

Twilight Starr
2007-10-21
ch 1,
Nice poem.

~Twilight Starr~
AK the Twilight
2007-03-21
ch 1,
You put an interesting twist on the classic line "home is where the heart is" and you definitely showed a good point in how it is approached. The rest of the poem tended to be rather flat, that is, less descriptions than hoped. I really like your concept, and approaching the concept with the same mindset as the beginning would likely make the poem better. Overall, though, it's a good poem. Just don't forget to tag along some descriptions too. Great job, overall.
mad knitter kt
2007-01-11
ch 1,
Almost childlike, but a touch bittersweet. Can't say I like your use of capitals that much, but then again, it's my personal preference to like poetry without bolding or odd capitalization or italics.
Nice to have a poem from you once in a while. You don't really write them (as far as I know) that often.
keep writing!
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