Yeah, I can see why it almost made you cry, it almost made me cry!! :( :( I feel so bad for all of them!! :( Their mother is absolutely horrible! D:

tis really good keep it up :D

Oh no...who was the HAND? Very good chapter! I'm glad they got the courage to leave, although it doesn't sound as if Cole's very prepared...Please, please update soon!!

Aw, poor kids! I REALLY hope that things go all right for them! You're doing a great job with this story! UPDATE SOON!

there are parts of this that are really really well done. and the rest isn't terrible, though there is definately room for revisions and such, but that will come in time. I think you've done a good job with this, it's very touching and the relationship among the siblings is very sweet. good luck with the rest

I feel so bad for Dylan, he's so torn. But, I guess that he made a decision. This is REALLY good! Update soon!

Awesome chapter, Fig!! :D Please UPDATE SOON!! :D

I want to cry...How can people be so cruel? It's so sad! :(
Please update soon, though!! :)

Yes, he probably has too much faith...I love this, it's very well written!! :)

I feel so bad for them! :( :( But I really like the relationships(between the siblings) so far!! :)

Oohh...Good story, fig!! So sad, but sweet at the same time! :)

wow...wow...wow...great chappie! i liked it...U HAVE TO WRITE MORE! NOW YOUNG LADY!this story keeps me so sad..but i still love it! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D!
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Aww, that was so sad! :( I feel so bad for those poor kids, there's not much that they can do! I can't wait to read more, so please, please, please update soon!

Your writing is amazing, fig! Very, very talented! This story is really good! I can't wait to read chapter four!

Another good chapter, sad though. :( I'll be heading to the next chapter now!