My only concrit is that the first stanza seemed a little off rhymically, but not too bad.

Other than that, excellent!

interseting...but like always its very good!

I liked this, but the first paragraph didn't flow that well. It is pretty good, and sad. I was feeling like this a couple months ago.

It has a sad feel to it. I liked it and can relate. Good job

We're studying sonnets in English right now. I like this one.

Pretty interesting. I like how it jumps around a little. Also usually when people add questions in their poems it doesn't flow well.. but with yours it does. Nice work :D