very creative ) i like the walmart part.

This is a really great poem. I liked the use of rhyme, the rythm was good and the meotion really captured me.

great work

O.O Eesh, angst was right. A littler murderous, ehh? However, I couldn't help but chuckle at the last line. Wal-Mart...nice spot.

hm... the feeling is good... but the rhyming kind of has me confused. is it supposed to rhyme or is that just coincidental? because sometimes it rhymes and sometimes it doesnt... i'm confused.

ha, the ending just made me laugh.

luv it! luv it! luv it! ) I like all the emotion you put into it and how u don't hold back this is how much i hate my ex too Great job

Oh i like the spite, the hate and misery of this!

This is going in to my favs!