Howdy, this story is amazing, kept me interested throughout. The whole concept of dreams are reality is really creepy, and whats with the clock haha. Shall defiantly have to read more of your stuff.

This story is great, I remember reading this a while back, before it was ever posted on here :) And I like the fact you have used Melbrew Manor and Melbrew Street from my old story "The Melbrew House" so thanks for creating a story inside the same world as mine (even though my story was very disturbing and involved incest...ew) But overall, I like this story, it's a good mystery that keeps you gripped until the end. And I love the ending, and as I told you a while back, everybody has a different idea about that creepy old clock, I like to believe it represented Ray's life, but that's just me! :P