love this story, please update

I'm hoping now that Tamber knows more about Marrow that he will be able to start helping him heal.

I love Tamber. Something about this story is that when you read You Belong With Me, Sariphan makes the Reyl camps seem like an amazing way of life with freedom and something like Gypsy set-ups. It sounds so idyllic and refreshing but in reality this particular camp the bearers are treat like servants and they paint the exact picture of modern day chauvinistic bigotry. That the 'women' cook and clean, look after the children and aren't good at anything else. Sexist **. Haha. But this particular story is a bit different seeing as it's discrimination against 'givers' and 'bearers' rather than men and women. But it still has the same basis. I love the new story and also, in wondering about how the women would conceive on the other review I got my own answer by reading this story. Asexual. Nice, haha. But I like how you tied this story into You Belong With Me by following through with Sariphan's order. It makes them more connected and closer rather than being un-related other than the series and being Zercan’s and everything. I love the sci-fi and the new story. Please update soon? I love the new characters and plot because even though this is a series and are connected through certain things you did, like the whole idea of searching through the Reyl camps before looking to other planets the stories are still unique in their own way. It’s another great story :]

I am completely in love with this chapter! update as soon as you can pretty please!

aww, i feel a moment coming on! :)

oh, bad Tamber! Poor Marrow, I have this uncomfortable feeling that there's something terribly wrong with his past.

Ohh god, I am in tears right now!! Please please please update soon.

my god... how can anyone be so cruel?

MORE SOON!

-shadow

keep updating dude

Aww poor Marrow -huggles- I kind of figured it was something of that effect >< Damn this is so good, I can't wait for the next chapter ^^ And thank you for answering my question, it will help greatly XD

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Okay,as you might notice I am speechless. I think I love Marrow even more now. What he's been through is something no man,woman or child should ever go through. And even though I am aware that this is just a piece of fiction,it hurt my heart just thinking of how much he's hurting.
Tamber really has his job cut out for him...healing a tortured soul is never easy...least of all one that was tortured for so long and from such an early age.
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Okay,I'm gonna go there *points to the corner of her room* sob my heart out and then I'll be back.
This is really...heavy. Damn,am I a masochist for liking this story so much and wanting to see if Tamber has what it takes to heal Marrow?
...Yeah,I probably am >_

Hee...I love how Tamber can't help but feel protective of Marrow :) He is so adorable,being somewhat like a mother hen without really meaning to.And he slapped the old guy! Woo hoo Tamber! And was jealous hee hee..he's coming along just fine *snickers*
And Marrow is just...perfect in all his imperfection. The way he's obviously hurting and still tries to act tough is just so like how I envisioned him...
I just have one question,I am thinking something is missing here,not sure if it was 'heart' or 'soul':

>>Turning to the woods, he bowed his head as a million memories flooded him and his could died a little more.

But I'm very happy that the bastard that did that to him was killed good job!! Very pleased I hope the tortured the bastard before they killed him for his awful crime

Why do stories always have to have RAPE in them I'm sick of this **

Aw, I love this story. I nearly cried when I read this chapter too. How could his bearer do that to him? And that man, Barak. What freaks! I feel so bad for Marrow :(

Anyway, great story so far (wish there was more). Please, update soon too :) Also, I wonder what this 'jess' person is saying. sounds like she's bashing? Perhaps.

anywho, can't wait for more :)

-eVil uNicorns-