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| tilover212 2007-08-29 ch 1,  | abuseOMG, I knew it was his!! |
| crazy.chaotic.cool 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abusedude, that kind of happened to me once. my mom was looking for dirty socks under my bed and found a pregnancy test wrapped in a sock wrapped in another sock. the worst part is that it was positive. she called me in and asked if there was something i needed to tell her...i said no. then she showed me the preg test and asked again, but before i could answer she went into a long rant about teen mothers and statistics and teen fathers and reliability and child support and blah blah...and i was like, "mom, thats my sisters you dum-dum." and then she was too tired to rant anymore to my sister (who happens to be twenty so she doesn't really NEED that rant anyway). later, my sis went to the doc to find out that the preg test was wrong after all. happy ending...i guess... *shrugs* awesome story, it made me laugh! w007! |
| smile persephone 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseMy mind went straight to a very naughty place. Is it just me, or is it rather strange that her brother's condom wrapper was in her room? Incest, anyone? Just kidding. This is a humorous story, though. Mortifying for her. Shouldn't her brother be embarrassed? Bleh, men have no shame. Nicely written story, though. |
| Bob Evans 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I HAVE to review this. I was just looking in to take a peak, and the next I know I find myself laughing at the sudden twist you put at the end. Genius! Brilliant! HA! ~Bob Evans |
| Kirsten Nussey 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseOh my god! That so had me laughing at the end - I loved it! |
| unconnected14 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseMothers. Always jumping to the wrong conclusions. Thankfully that's never happened to me. |
| Ashenlo Death Purified 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuseI love your humor! Tee hee! I haven't had anything like that happen, and I doubt it ever will. My closest brother is more than 10 years my junior... Your voice is evident throughout although your grammar is a bit askew in places... However, that's just me being me! I'm a grammar fiend; I can't help it. Still, this story made me laugh! Keep up the good work! |