good start! but yes, slightly confusing with all the characters as you said! fran ~*~

sounds promising :D ~*~

Wow Its rlly good im in love...its amazing please update...

I love Vampire Werewolves angels ect.

anywho laters

ohoho! uch a nice story, you shoul post more *cough* hahahaha

this story has a TON of potential. it's probably gonna get confusing, but i'll try to keep up ^_^

I like how the names are related to the characteristics ^-^
I think you mean SIXTEEN candles. :]Gosh Yowai is short