Wow, I think this is going to my favorites. There're so many emotions and thoughts in this one that jump out at me. I really love this, seriously.

"(or will it break me?)" I love that part, and it's so true with writing isn't it? "past in black and white" I find myself thinking this way a lot.

So, basically, GREAT job.

ANNA

I really like this. It feels raw, in a way, but perfect. A lot of emotion is conveyed in this and it really brings the poem to life. Nice job.