The character development of Casey is good. I feel like there's more to this story, but of course, it's a short. haha. It kind of reminded me of IT, one of the earlier chapters. Again, good imagery. I think you have a way of capturing an illustration.

i have never seen a clown as scary but maybe now i will have a different opinion... nah, i wont... fictiondoesnt scare me, but uit does entertain me greatly...

The little poems at the end of your stories are neat. I've never seen anyone do that sort of thing after their stories.

This was a neat little story. I don't usually read works this short, but for some reason it caught my eye. Good work!

v.nice, How did you write a story that short!! :P (v.talented)

when u first told me bout the clown idea on msn, I didnt really know how you could make a clown scarier (than it already is!) but u sure showed me :P lol. Just makes ya shiver when you think of the black stuff oozing out of a flap in his face >_< :S. lol

Tis very short but also enjoyable.. looking forward to any other shorts uv'e got in mind :)

Maybe (dunno exactly weather it'll suit your style)you could add a little more description on the grusome stuff; as u most famously do in other stories u've written. Like, for example, after Casey keeps stabbing him.. what does he look like after that.. (i dare to imagine >_

Horribly fantastic, you have a talent for writing, but you need to work on your logic. Read the story yourself from an outsider view and ask yourselves questions that a reader would ask when reading it and see if you've answered it inside the story. Keep it up!

Wow, I really like your story. It was short and sweet, and terrifying:) You are a really good writer and I'm glad you take the time to spell words correctly. But anyways, awesome job:) Keep writing!