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| simpleplan13 2007-02-18 ch 1,   | I love the karma line and the ending... its well done... |
| Ice and Snow 2007-01-21 ch 1, | you sound tense. |wink| =] lovely as usual. different. nice. |
| QueenVixta 2007-01-20 ch 1, | Wow...the power just pours of the poem. It's a beautiful piece and really well written. Expressed really well too. Great work. queenvixta |
| lackluster 2007-01-20 ch 1, | "Cross me - I dare you" the violence is there. i love the little glimpses. such anger. and yet it's almost relaxed. love it. |
| animegirl777 2007-01-11 ch 1, | Oh my Budha. I love that poem. I think that maybe my new favorite. I love how you allude to so much violence and it of your words. It rocks. I shall print it out and cherish it 4evr! |
| Falcon0Rider 2007-01-10 ch 1, | I like it. Very intense words and feeling throughout. I really don't think you should change anything, so I have nothing to suggest. Great job! |