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Reviews For: Psychoanalyzing Coma Paitents
closet rebel 2007-12-08 . chapter 1
beautiful and inspiring. i like it a lot
Banshee Junior 2007-02-04 . chapter 1
I loved this dialogue between the voice and Sam/Fin. Sam seems so much like the man who CANNOT change, that the image of the city becomes him - especially the one where the cars move at the same pace and the windows are all the same. When Jen was mentioned, I started wondering whether Vie was Jen herself, but by the end it didn't seem to matter at all, because whoever it is, Vie came out on its own, with its own personality.

That last bit, with Vie calling Fin, Sam...I think it's really beautiful.
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